Monthly Archives: February 2008

Toda y our group  is hoping to finish our assesment or at least gte really close to it. Toda y i have not got  any tasks but we are going to have a group meeting and then go from there.

 

ANALYSIS-

This aboriginal poem is about the hopelessness and need

for help. This poem is a metaphorically based poem which uses a horse in the place of the aboriginals. The poet

reflects on the horse as it were one of her own. At the

end of the poem,

He/she says, what have they done to us, This then puts the a question on us to make us think about it. It gives you

the hint that she indeed was talking about aboriginals. This is a

smart way of getting a message across to the reader, using this will get the reader working it out, and… makes the reader think that the poet id very smart and wise.

The poem’s mood is gloomy , it is almost an ask for help. She gives the feeling that the world is cruel and unfair for there bad things happening like this, The poet is not wrong. She uses the technique of ,using metaphors and using parody, giving the idea in two different ways

 

 

today our group has to get on task because our pm online doesnt work at home so we need to do our individual assesment aswell as finish the project.

Screen Shot 1

To much information and no picture boring!

Chart

No information just a table so hard to read and get info out of it.

Screen Shot 3

This slide is good because ther is information and also pictures to make it interesting.

TEXT eg Barcelona quickly showcased the talents of their new striker in an exhibition match against AC Milan.

HYPER TEXT eg FC Barcelona

AUDIO eg: www.youtube.com/watch?v=zElEs8yw7fw

IMAGE:

Ronaldinho.jpg

 eg http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P-bWsOK-h98

Q2) there is to much writing ,it is not colourful and it is not refrenced

 Luke 25:37- Challenge to live a Simple Life

Matthew 21 33:45- Caring for Others

Matthew 16 21:28- Facing up to Suffering and Death with Courage – Denying yourself for God’s Kingdom

Matthew 25 14:28- Don’t waste your talents

Mark 10 17:29- Challenging Injustice and corruption

Luke 22 47:52- Promote Peace

today i am going to focus on my individual assesment because our group has  already  done the research.

Today our group is going to work on our individual assesment because we have all done our part in our research  and this lesson im planning to finish my individual assesment.

Evaluate your contribution to the group and your own work ethic? i think i have contributed well in our group because i am  doing my part and also a  fare share in the work.

What did you find your strengths and weaknesses were? my strengths are using the internet and researching but my weakness is putting together info and summerising.

which part of the exposition are you responsible for? My part of the exposition is to type up and contribute them to the group.

What supplementary material are you using to back up your thesis points (your argument)?  We are going to supply a cover letter and some extra infomation mabey a picture or a link .